Loosing My Freedom

A tale of angels an' saints , heaven an' earth
Above all God's will to end and master my life
Loosing my freedom was yet th' greatest gift
For i before all nature was more beautiful hence
I dived to breathe only a mist of real life , true being
Prayer was the only truth i had left in me
I became a sign to never let go through all times 
A lesson of love and sacrifice only for God 



April, 05, 2019
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April 19, 2019 at 7:35 AM
Just Lovely, Talin. ...Fran
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