Loosening the Air Bag

Slipping into my silver-gray SUV
Nicknamed  " Sly Buster Cruiser”
I speed off down the rocky, off-highway road.
Twisting and reeling like my wired mind,
windows down, sunroof open,
(Annie Lennox groveling on the CD player),
reckless noon rays on my chin,
wind on ticklish, naked nape ...
Damn, who cares? I am 19 again?

Shuffling into the 7-Eleven Store
beside the Shell gas station 
(With a free wind shield clean-up),
I draw out some bucks for a Philip Morris pack
and a two bottles of  beer, plus a Dorito
( the barbecue flavor , please)…
Ain’t a drinker; a smoker on occasion,
but I feel like being reckless and 
slightly rebellious ;
I lock the door prepping up for an untamed  ride.

Grabbing a spray of cologne mist
and red-violet lipstick from  the tote,
my irises roll from the lane to the side mirror,
as I slowly dunk the beer, icy and bubbly
zooming away with hands laughing on the wheels.

Nobody knows me in this place; my ribs shout silently:
This is just all for me; just now, I’ll be.
This is just between me and the edge of a free road.
This is about my navel breathing fire and ice,
It’s about touching danger fast without reason or fuzz
Because later, all this smooth craziness will soon pass.

Back to the same home trail, I rip the cigarette sticks,
slide  the unused bottle in my bag
before wiping the red on lips with the Dorito foil…

“ Mommy, Mommy… where have you been?”
I smile as if my skin had chased a tornado…
Dumping the beer on the back porch, 
My hand is cleansed by some kind of holy water,
And  I start to hug my mischievous girl...
Then off I start to roll the plates on the sinking sink.

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Celebrating My Faves Contest
For Andrea Dietrich--Faved by Sponsor
Reposted 4/24/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Gault Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Chock full of fun and adventure, and I enjoyed the ride! Amazing detail! Congratulations on the win in Andrea's favorites contest!
A   Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Nette,, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 9:28 AM
An enjoyable, fun filled ride, Nette! Congrats on being Andrea's fave!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 2:21 AM
This was so cool Nette! I see why Andrea loved this one! Congrats! # 7. ; )
May Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 5:27 PM
A ride on the wild side...Congrats on a fine win Nette..
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 2:06 PM
A well handled rebellious ride. Congratulations. Andrea has good taste in poetry. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Congrts on yr winning work..SK
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:36 AM
such a vivid descriptive poem nette:-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:38 AM
nette, this is amazing! I'm so excited to read all the faves :)-luloo
Phookan Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 11:41 AM
nette, helluva roaming that was...wowee!! and Congrats!! love...
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 11:40 AM
wONDERFUL WRITE nETTE .cONGRATS ON YOUR HM.(oops)
Mannan Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 4:35 AM
This is beautiful Nette. I could so imagine you. Many congrats for this win.
Osita Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Congrats on your success in Drake's contest!
Song Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Great story and oh sooo sweeet. Savin it for my favs. Gwendolen
Devonshire Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Dear Nette, Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Nette. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 9:41 AM
Many congrats on your win, Nette : )
Mehta Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Drake, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Congrats Nette luv on your HM in I roam contest with this unique expression of a great adventure in roaming my friend.. yes all back to 'normal'..oh ..for me that is super activity.. house hunting for my son Anthony at the moment.. oh.. enjoy your special honor sweets...
Long Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 5:19 AM
nicely written congrats on your win in the contest. cory
Knop Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Well written, Nette! Great write and cute!*Hugs*, Gert:) Will cross my fingers for the contest!
K. Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 8:30 AM
This was soo much fun, Nette! So cool of you to write this way, totally enjoyed this one! Very real! Could picture this oh so well! just love it! happy Easter! :D hugs :)
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 3:52 AM
Saw your email but I didn't get the "touch me" physically part of dusk and already deleted the entire poem. Good luck with you contest and have a nice Easter. Carolyn
A   Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Nette, very deep.. sure liked.... I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Hi Nette, I pulled my poem out of the contest and deleted it. The only way dusk can "touch" me is touching my heart. Love and blessings for a happy Easter! Carolyn
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