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Loosening the Air Bag

Slipping into my silver-gray SUV Nicknamed " Sly Buster Cruiser” I speed off down the rocky, off-highway road. Twisting and reeling like my wired mind, windows down, sunroof open, (Annie Lennox groveling on the CD player), reckless noon rays on my chin, wind on ticklish, naked nape ... Damn, who cares? I am 19 again? Shuffling into the 7-Eleven Store beside the Shell gas station (With a free wind shield clean-up), I draw out some bucks for a Philip Morris pack and a two bottles of beer, plus a Dorito ( the barbecue flavor , please)… Ain’t a drinker; a smoker on occasion, but I feel like being reckless and slightly rebellious ; I lock the door prepping up for an untamed ride. Grabbing a spray of cologne mist and red-violet lipstick from the tote, my irises roll from the lane to the side mirror, as I slowly dunk the beer, icy and bubbly zooming away with hands laughing on the wheels. Nobody knows me in this place; my ribs shout silently: This is just all for me; just now, I’ll be. This is just between me and the edge of a free road. This is about my navel breathing fire and ice, It’s about touching danger fast without reason or fuzz Because later, all this smooth craziness will soon pass. Back to the same home trail, I rip the cigarette sticks, slide the unused bottle in my bag before wiping the red on lips with the Dorito foil… “ Mommy, Mommy… where have you been?” I smile as if my skin had chased a tornado… Dumping the beer on the back porch, My hand is cleansed by some kind of holy water, And I start to hug my mischievous girl... Then off I start to roll the plates on the sinking sink. `````` ````` Celebrating My Faves Contest For Andrea Dietrich--Faved by Sponsor Reposted 4/24/2016

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Date: 5/6/2016 1:36:00 PM
Chock full of fun and adventure, and I enjoyed the ride! Amazing detail! Congratulations on the win in Andrea's favorites contest!
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Date: 5/1/2016 6:48:00 PM
Nette,, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2016 9:28:00 AM
An enjoyable, fun filled ride, Nette! Congrats on being Andrea's fave!
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Date: 4/28/2016 2:21:00 AM
This was so cool Nette! I see why Andrea loved this one! Congrats! # 7. ; )
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Date: 4/27/2016 5:27:00 PM
A ride on the wild side...Congrats on a fine win Nette..
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Date: 4/27/2016 2:06:00 PM
A well handled rebellious ride. Congratulations. Andrea has good taste in poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:30:00 PM
Congrts on yr winning work..SK
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:36:00 AM
such a vivid descriptive poem nette:-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:38:00 AM
nette, this is amazing! I'm so excited to read all the faves :)-luloo
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:41:00 AM
nette, helluva roaming that was...wowee!! and Congrats!! love...
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:40:00 AM
wONDERFUL WRITE nETTE .cONGRATS ON YOUR HM.(oops)
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:35:00 AM
This is beautiful Nette. I could so imagine you. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Drake's contest!
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:12:00 PM
Great story and oh sooo sweeet. Savin it for my favs. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:44:00 AM
Dear Nette, Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 9:41:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Nette : )
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Drake, nette
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:26:00 AM
Congrats Nette luv on your HM in I roam contest with this unique expression of a great adventure in roaming my friend.. yes all back to 'normal'..oh ..for me that is super activity.. house hunting for my son Anthony at the moment.. oh.. enjoy your special honor sweets...
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:19:00 AM
nicely written congrats on your win in the contest. cory
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:35:00 AM
Well written, Nette! Great write and cute!*Hugs*, Gert:) Will cross my fingers for the contest!
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:30:00 AM
This was soo much fun, Nette! So cool of you to write this way, totally enjoyed this one! Very real! Could picture this oh so well! just love it! happy Easter! :D hugs :)
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Date: 4/24/2011 3:52:00 AM
Saw your email but I didn't get the "touch me" physically part of dusk and already deleted the entire poem. Good luck with you contest and have a nice Easter. Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:19:00 PM
Nette, very deep.. sure liked.... I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:31:00 PM
Hi Nette, I pulled my poem out of the contest and deleted it. The only way dusk can "touch" me is touching my heart. Love and blessings for a happy Easter! Carolyn
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