Loose Tooth

My first tooth fell out last night
It gave me such a big fright
"Oh, Mommy help me"
Or so soon I will be
With dentures like grandpa, Dwight!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spence Sr Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 11:54 PM
Hahahahah! This one is a good laugh. However, in a way it's very serious. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Joseph
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May 22, 2010 at 7:44 PM
nice! i like this a lot.
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 9:34 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Crystal. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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