Loose Threads Run - In Time Unpick

fortune teller knits a future ... time pulls at loose threads unraveling

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2018 6:33:00 PM

Well done, John. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2018 6:27:00 PM

ohhh, that is a really cool metaphor. WELL DONE!!! And congrats

John Anderson

Date: 1/6/2018 1:55:00 PM

Thanks for the comments - greatly appreciated!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2018 1:51:00 PM

- Congratulations John, on your great second place in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 11:42:00 AM

Congrats, John. Great monoku.

Silent One

Date: 1/6/2018 9:28:00 AM

Great one liner John... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..