Loopdah Plane a Carnival Memory

sixties memories
home town, Iowa
I was just a kid
riding upside down
on a loop-da-plane

4th of July
carnival ride
my pigtails fly
upside down sky

loving it
fuzzy blurs
screaming now

joyful
thrilling

fun
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Hankins Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Oh, yeah. I think that must be the same ride I considered my favorite when I was a youngster. While the whole contraption revolved, the individual car also turned over and over. I loved it. I could ride it all day long!
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November 27, 2022 at 3:32 AM
This is the one!!!!!
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