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Looking Within

Be still, quiet for quietness enhances your awareness of your being, whatever life means to you and maybe, discover your purpose in life. ~~~ Quote by Poet ~~~ LOOKING WITHIN There are times when everything seem so out of control, times when you feel restrained, trapped, chaffed, suffocated and deep down you are resisting, fighting against these ill feelings, trying so hard to withstand, not let the situations affect you. The times when there are so many things in your mind, like you’re going out of your head for answers, to do or not to do, to say or not say, to stay or to go and you’re way over your head feeling so lost, uncertain, unable to face head on or let go. That is when I want to run and stay by the sea to CALM me down. Where I find it PEACEFUL for the sound of the waves relaxes me, like a lullaby soothing me to be STILL, QUIET and gazing at the horizon makes me a TRANQUIL or a SERENE person to be able to think logically. I am able to clear and free my mind to find the answers or to discern and perceive insights, perspectives to make a sound or reasonable decision. Yes, looking within, to look inside my inner thoughts, to figure out what I think, feel, say and do affect my life and others I love and care about. 5/11/21 Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Constance La France Used: PS Grammar Checker Highlight: CAPITALIZATION

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Date: 5/25/2021 4:05:00 AM
Marilene, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem and quote, love _Constance
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Marilene Evans
Date: 5/25/2021 6:57:00 AM
Thanks so much, Constance for my placement and compliments. Have a great day. Love Marilene
Date: 5/23/2021 12:21:00 PM
I too find sanctuary by the soothing sound of the sea which is nt difficult as i live on a tiny little Island, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Marilene Evans
Date: 5/23/2021 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! You're so lucky living in a tiny island. I live in a congested area of Los Angeles county and going to the beach takes too long because of the traffic. So I just keep still, pretend and imagine I'm there by the sea.
Date: 5/23/2021 2:08:00 AM
Marilene this is a marvellous write and has come at the right time for me as I’m looking within and wondering how to go on with all the difficult issues I’m facing at the moment. Congratulations on your worthy win… Belle
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Marilene Evans
Date: 5/23/2021 9:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Belle. Have faith and hope. I wish you will go through them smoothly.
Date: 5/22/2021 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 5/22/2021 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. Have a good night.
Date: 5/13/2021 12:08:00 PM
Great writing using the six words, Marilene. A sure winner!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 5/13/2021 12:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I appreciate it. Have a great day.

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