Looking Upward '82

I remembered a time in spring
                                         when I glazed upward,
                                      the clouds taking shapes of
                                           trains, elephants, lions and cars.
                                       I could spend hours playing my
                                                games.

                                       Now, when I look up,
                                          those shapes are gone.
                                       In their place, words like cumulus,
                                           cirrus, stratus and cumulonimbus
                                        enter.
                                       
                                        Somehow I like the old games better.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Smith Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Enjoyed your profundity of reflection.
Roske Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 8:07 AM
It's never too late to play those games - love watching clouds. Great piece.
Cornwall Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Fantastic writing>patrick
Austin Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Good write. I too am a child at heart and like the old games. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tucker. Love, Carol
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