Looking Up In Awe

I loved to stargaze on a warm Summer's night, living in a country village as a boy. The stars back then appeared amazingly bright, providing hours of imaginative joy. A breathtaking, almost spiritual sight, the kids in cities never got to enjoy. And to this day, some haven't seen a starry sky, but I hope that they all will, before they die. Imagine billions of stars scattered above, like sparkling diamonds, twinkling in the pitch-black. Away from the grinding gears of push and shove, I'd silently listen to Nature's soundtrack. And observe creation, basking in God's love, spending hours just staring up, flat on my back. Feeling connected, as a part of it all, I'd look up in awe, watching shooting stars fall.
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Mcintosh Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Wonderful writing as usual. God bless you and congratulations. much love, Gina
Pinet Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Thanks, Regina; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Woods Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 1:07 PM
So smooth and melodious! My eyes and minds practically slide across each phrase... like a shooting star! No friction to slow it down or trip you up. Beautiful sentiments! Xo
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Thanks, Crystol; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 5:33 PM
The city dweller, might well imagine, as your imagery sets their minds on what their eyes have never seen. Congrats, Emile, on 3rd place win!
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Thanks, Kim; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Pinet Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Empress Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 11:52 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous dear emile, i loved reading you today, as a stargazer that never gets tired of starry nights i resonated with your well articulated lines and rhymes! Stunning picture to go with it too. I agree it is truly a pity for anyone that doesn’t get the chance to experience starry nights or to stargaze. Natures soundtrack is the best for the soul. Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations also on your win in brians contest. Sending you light always
Pinet Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 2:59 PM
Thank you, my friend; I appreciate your wonderful comments. You always make my day; giving me a reason to smile. Emile.
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