Looking Up

It has struck midnight once before
It tolled the end of a terrible war
Fifty million of us were lost
Wars are waged with alarming cost

It warns us all through out the land
We fear the movement of its hand
There is no key to reset the wind
Its powered by our frightened mind

We guess at our fate and recall our birth
It reminds us of our singular earth
We have but one, one place to dwell
Put distance between that clock and its’ bell 

If ever those hands point towards the sky
Then ours must wave one last goodbye

10 Feb 18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/27/2018 6:53:00 AM
Great! A vivid image in last two lines! Congratulations, Jerry!
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:36:00 AM
Well done, Jerry. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:00:00 PM
wow, you did superbly with the prompt if this is the contest I think you are writing for. Awesome!!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/19/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thanks and yes it is for the doomsday clock prompt, and ah but yours are always quietly better.
Date: 2/10/2018 4:45:00 AM
Great poem Jerr...
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/19/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you.
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