Looking Up

Messages of sun
Through shades of my quiet trees
Nature's Umbrella

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/16/2010 1:39:00 PM
well, at least YOUR umbrella poem made it in the winner's circle. Congratulations, Iolanda! Glad you got in. There are many great winners. Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:23:00 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a beautiful view of the photo and a wonderful win for u my friend to so enjoy... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:18:00 AM
I love it, the umbrella is brilliant- Congrats Iolanda
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:57:00 AM
Iolanda, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:01:00 AM
LOve this, hope its for contest? Natures Umbrella...very fitting
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:34:00 PM
Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...the picture reminded me of a giant umbrella too...lol...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 4/10/2010 8:35:00 PM
Wonderful words Iolanda nd good luck in the contest if u enter for Gareth's photo.. amanzing words and lovely image to behold..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/10/2010 3:45:00 PM
Iolanda~ A very nice Haiku! Laura :)
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:23:00 PM
Sounds so peaceful. Our winds were gusting to 100 km. yesterday. That is rare in Sask. Lost my screen door to boot got blown and glass all over the deck. So sitting under the trees sounds nice today. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/10/2010 1:31:00 PM
nice one
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