Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Free verse

Looking Outside the Window

It was yesterday 
The brown grass was seen
Waking in the morn
The scene was different

Joe  Ann looked outside
A sudden change seen
The wind was blowing
The snow was dancing

Making the snow move
In a zig zag form
The snowflakes dancing
In the empty field

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Ann Foster January 29, 2020 at 11:52 AM I can see angels wings... barely between the flakes, cascading in the wind. So beautiful my friend. Love your work. God Bless your day. Ann Darlene De Beaulieu January 29, 2020 at 2:01 PM Hello Ann Foster,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene

Cecilia Macfarlane January 26, 2020 at 4:51 PM A lovely write describing a beautiful scene. Hugs Darlene De Beaulieu January 26, 2020 at 6:33 PM Hello Ceciilia Macfarlane,thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Sandra Adams January 25, 2020 at 10:09 PM one can visualize this scene through your words... beautifully penned Darlene :) hugs Darlene De Beaulieu January 26, 2020 at 10:00 AM Hello Sandra,Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser January 22, 2020 at 1:59 PM This is easily seen from your words; well penned piece. Darlene De Beaulieu January 23, 2020 at 7:45 AM Hello M.L, Kiser,so nice to see you. thank you for the lovely co,,ent. have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry January 22, 2020 at 11:35 AM SNOW FALLING AND I ONLY THINKING ABOUT HOW IS TO LIVE THERE IN CANADA...I AM FOND OF SNOW BUT NEVER REALLY SAW IT...GREAT IMAGES YOU PAINTED TO ME MY DEAREST FRIEND...THANKS SALUTE ALKAS Darlene De Beaulieu January 22, 2020 at 12:25 PM Hello Alakas Poetry, the color of snow is white. Snowflakes come the sky spreading outward, making piles of snow. Sometimes we have cold blizzards days. Freezing rain, makes it hard to walk. Have a nice day my friend. Salute Darlene

Joseph P. DiMino January 21, 2020 at 5:46 PM Very visual, beautiful imagery! Well done! Darlene De Beaulieu January 22, 2020 at 9:53 AM Hello Joe DiMino, thank you Joe for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina January 18, 2020 at 5:57 AM Lovely imagery, Darlene. The snow is falling as I am typing...in a zigzag fashion (lol). Nice write...brrr Charlie Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2020 at 11:33 AM Hello Charles today it is snowing and with a little snow squall to go with it. So we have the same weather. yes brr! Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Kelly Deschler January 17, 2020 at 5:45 PM Some very nice imagery in this poem. Great work Darlene! ... I can relate because the snow is falling outside my window right now, too :) Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2020 at 11:35 AM Hello Kelly, oh! It is snowing here as well. With a little snow squall added. Havea nice day my frind.

Nick Bagnall January 17, 2020 at 9:20 AM A pleasant scene, how swiftly it can change sometimes, I felt the flow from verse 2 to verse 3 was a little arkward, but enjoyed the imagery Darlene De Beaulieu January 17, 2020 at 10:10 AM Hello Heidi,the snowflakes dancing in the field.Because the snow squall made the snowflakes dance. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Tom Cunningham January 16, 2020 at 12:13 PM A scene I love to see Darlene but only rain here in the UK at the moment. Tom Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2020 at 2:04 PM Hello Tom Cuuningham,I would rather have the rain. On Saturday we will have more snow. The Spring thaw is over. Oh well! Have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios January 16, 2020 at 12:41 AM Hello Darlene de Beaulieu! You are my last read for tonight. What a perfect poem this is! Thank you. Good Night, Panagiota xx Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2020 at 11:54 AM Hello Panagiota Romios, thank you Panagiota for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Rico Leffanta January 15, 2020 at 2:07 PM No frost on your window to give you a chill? Best to see beauty where it lies! Aloha! Rico Darlene De Beaulieu January 15, 2020 at 6:15 PM Hello Rico Leffanta, oh but i do see beauty everywhere I look.Aloha! Darlene

Heidi Sands January 15, 2020 at 1:49 PM This is beautiful. I love this Darlene! Have a great rest of your day :) Darlene De Beaulieu January 15, 2020 at 6:16 PM Hello Heidi,thank you for the lovely comment. gave a nice evening my friend.

Chris Green January 15, 2020 at 1:36 PM A very lovely winter scene you have created with your words Darlene. Really nice. Darlene De Beaulieu January 15, 2020 at 6:19 PM Hello Chris, I have seen this winter scene many times. Have a nice evening my friend.