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Looking Outside the Window

It was yesterday The brown grass was seen Waking in the morn The scene was different Joe Ann looked outside A sudden change seen The wind was blowing The snow was dancing Making the snow move In a zig zag form The snowflakes dancing In the empty field

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Ann Foster

Date: 1/29/2020 11:52:00 AM

I can see angels wings... barely between the flakes, cascading in the wind. So beautiful my friend. Love your work. God Bless your day. Ann

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/29/2020 2:01:00 PM

Hello Ann Foster,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/26/2020 4:51:00 PM

A lovely write describing a beautiful scene. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/26/2020 6:33:00 PM

Hello Ceciilia Macfarlane,thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/25/2020 10:09:00 PM

one can visualize this scene through your words... beautifully penned Darlene :) hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/26/2020 10:00:00 AM

Hello Sandra,Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/22/2020 1:59:00 PM

This is easily seen from your words; well penned piece.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/23/2020 7:45:00 AM

Hello M.L, Kiser,so nice to see you. thank you for the lovely co,,ent. have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 1/22/2020 11:35:00 AM

SNOW FALLING AND I ONLY THINKING ABOUT HOW IS TO LIVE THERE IN CANADA...I AM FOND OF SNOW BUT NEVER REALLY SAW IT...GREAT IMAGES YOU PAINTED TO ME MY DEAREST FRIEND...THANKS SALUTE ALKAS

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2020 12:25:00 PM

Hello Alakas Poetry, the color of snow is white. Snowflakes come the sky spreading outward, making piles of snow. Sometimes we have cold blizzards days. Freezing rain, makes it hard to walk. Have a nice day my friend. Salute Darlene

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/21/2020 5:46:00 PM

Very visual, beautiful imagery! Well done!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2020 9:53:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, thank you Joe for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2020 5:57:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Darlene. The snow is falling as I am typing...in a zigzag fashion (lol). Nice write...brrr Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2020 11:33:00 AM

Hello Charles today it is snowing and with a little snow squall to go with it. So we have the same weather. yes brr! Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/17/2020 5:45:00 PM

Some very nice imagery in this poem. Great work Darlene! ... I can relate because the snow is falling outside my window right now, too :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2020 11:35:00 AM

Hello Kelly, oh! It is snowing here as well. With a little snow squall added. Havea nice day my frind.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/17/2020 9:20:00 AM

A pleasant scene, how swiftly it can change sometimes, I felt the flow from verse 2 to verse 3 was a little arkward, but enjoyed the imagery

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2020 10:10:00 AM

Hello Heidi,the snowflakes dancing in the field.Because the snow squall made the snowflakes dance. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2020 12:13:00 PM

A scene I love to see Darlene but only rain here in the UK at the moment. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/16/2020 2:04:00 PM

Hello Tom Cuuningham,I would rather have the rain. On Saturday we will have more snow. The Spring thaw is over. Oh well! Have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/16/2020 12:41:00 AM

Hello Darlene de Beaulieu! You are my last read for tonight. What a perfect poem this is! Thank you. Good Night, Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/16/2020 11:54:00 AM

Hello Panagiota Romios, thank you Panagiota for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/15/2020 2:07:00 PM

No frost on your window to give you a chill? Best to see beauty where it lies! Aloha! Rico

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2020 6:15:00 PM

Hello Rico Leffanta, oh but i do see beauty everywhere I look.Aloha! Darlene

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/15/2020 1:49:00 PM

This is beautiful. I love this Darlene! Have a great rest of your day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2020 6:16:00 PM

Hello Heidi,thank you for the lovely comment. gave a nice evening my friend.

Chris Green

Date: 1/15/2020 1:36:00 PM

A very lovely winter scene you have created with your words Darlene. Really nice.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2020 6:19:00 PM

Hello Chris, I have seen this winter scene many times. Have a nice evening my friend.