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Looking Outside the Window

It was yesterday 
The brown grass was seen
Waking in the morn
The scene was different

Joe  Ann looked outside
A sudden change seen
The wind was blowing
The snow was dancing

Making the snow move
In a zig zag form
The snowflakes dancing
In the empty field

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Ann Foster

Date: 1/29/2020 11:52:00 AM

I can see angels wings... barely between the flakes, cascading in the wind. So beautiful my friend. Love your work. God Bless your day. Ann

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/29/2020 2:01:00 PM

Hello Ann Foster,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/26/2020 4:51:00 PM

A lovely write describing a beautiful scene. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/26/2020 6:33:00 PM

Hello Ceciilia Macfarlane,thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/25/2020 10:09:00 PM

one can visualize this scene through your words... beautifully penned Darlene :) hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/26/2020 10:00:00 AM

Hello Sandra,Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/22/2020 1:59:00 PM

This is easily seen from your words; well penned piece.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/23/2020 7:45:00 AM

Hello M.L, Kiser,so nice to see you. thank you for the lovely co,,ent. have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 1/22/2020 11:35:00 AM

SNOW FALLING AND I ONLY THINKING ABOUT HOW IS TO LIVE THERE IN CANADA...I AM FOND OF SNOW BUT NEVER REALLY SAW IT...GREAT IMAGES YOU PAINTED TO ME MY DEAREST FRIEND...THANKS SALUTE ALKAS

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2020 12:25:00 PM

Hello Alakas Poetry, the color of snow is white. Snowflakes come the sky spreading outward, making piles of snow. Sometimes we have cold blizzards days. Freezing rain, makes it hard to walk. Have a nice day my friend. Salute Darlene

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/21/2020 5:46:00 PM

Very visual, beautiful imagery! Well done!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2020 9:53:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, thank you Joe for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2020 5:57:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Darlene. The snow is falling as I am typing...in a zigzag fashion (lol). Nice write...brrr Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2020 11:33:00 AM

Hello Charles today it is snowing and with a little snow squall to go with it. So we have the same weather. yes brr! Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/17/2020 5:45:00 PM

Some very nice imagery in this poem. Great work Darlene! ... I can relate because the snow is falling outside my window right now, too :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2020 11:35:00 AM

Hello Kelly, oh! It is snowing here as well. With a little snow squall added. Havea nice day my frind.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/17/2020 9:20:00 AM

A pleasant scene, how swiftly it can change sometimes, I felt the flow from verse 2 to verse 3 was a little arkward, but enjoyed the imagery

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2020 10:10:00 AM

Hello Heidi,the snowflakes dancing in the field.Because the snow squall made the snowflakes dance. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.