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Looking Into the Future

sun catching a glimpse
of a golden day ahead-

                   moments framed by time


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For Skat's contest: Picture Perfect II
6/21/15

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David Mohn

June 28, 2015 at 10:39 PM

Beautiful Carrie...congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 9:27 PM

wow, Skat did a fantastic job picking yours and Connie's for top placements. This is AWESOME.

Edward Ebbs

June 25, 2015 at 8:48 PM

Very Nice Congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong

June 25, 2015 at 6:43 PM

This is such an outstanding entry Carrie, I am thrilled to share top placement with you and Richard. Kudos Carrie! Cheers, Connie

Jill Spagnola

June 25, 2015 at 2:13 PM

sorry, but, friggin adorable :), jill

Emile Pinet

June 25, 2015 at 10:44 AM

Congratulations Carrie, your words are beautiful, and yet so strong, layered with emotion. Emile.

Constance La France

June 25, 2015 at 10:27 AM

Carrie congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write

Paul Callus

June 25, 2015 at 7:34 AM

Such a lovely haiku, Carrie! Caught in a timeframe! Congratulations on your top win! // paul

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:04 AM

Your poem is a picture within a picture of a picture holding a picture of a picture. Congratulations.

Judy Konos

June 25, 2015 at 6:59 AM

Like I said, "Nobody does it better, better than all the rest. Nobody does it half as good as you...baby you're the best!" Oh wait that's a song.....Congratulations....

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:05 AM

This comment makes me smile!