Looking For Love In All the Wrong Places

<        this poem is not about what is written, but what is not written
          like the smile upon her face that looks nil and somewhat smitten

          and lochs of hair hanging instead of with bows and lace
          tell me my angelic angel have you fallen from God's good grace

          has your garments of thread gone out of time
          has your dance with the butterflies gotten out of rhyme

         have you been cast from your lovers heart
         or are you just looking to start over with brand new start

         has clouds silver lining rained upon your dreams
         has leafs dance gone frozen in crystal streams


         time stands still amidst wondering thoughts
         time stands still when lovers cant be sought 




Written By Katherine Stella 7/4/11

Entry For A Rambling Poet's 
The Unwritten Contest
G.L. All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:47 PM
Katherine, this is very nice. I love your theme! Such an interesting and different way you took of seeing the picture. Congratulations on your win.
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July 8, 2011 at 6:42 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! really great placement in the contest..*_*junjun
George   Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful, Katherine. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 7:02 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest , Katherine, a neat job. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Katherine. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 2:50 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Katherine
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 1:23 PM
… katherine, swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Congrats Katherine on your fantastic win with this dynamic write luv..enjoy ..for excellence in poetry ...
La France Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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