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Looking For Love In All the Wrong Places

<        this poem is not about what is written, but what is not written
          like the smile upon her face that looks nil and somewhat smitten

          and lochs of hair hanging instead of with bows and lace
          tell me my angelic angel have you fallen from God's good grace

          has your garments of thread gone out of time
          has your dance with the butterflies gotten out of rhyme

         have you been cast from your lovers heart
         or are you just looking to start over with brand new start

         has clouds silver lining rained upon your dreams
         has leafs dance gone frozen in crystal streams


         time stands still amidst wondering thoughts
         time stands still when lovers cant be sought 




Written By Katherine Stella 7/4/11

Entry For A Rambling Poet's 
The Unwritten Contest
G.L. All

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/8/2011 6:47:00 PM
Katherine, this is very nice. I love your theme! Such an interesting and different way you took of seeing the picture. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:42:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! really great placement in the contest..*_*junjun
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful, Katherine. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:02:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest , Katherine, a neat job. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Katherine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:50:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Katherine
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:23:00 PM
… katherine, swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congrats Katherine on your fantastic win with this dynamic write luv..enjoy ..for excellence in poetry ...
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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