Looking For Love Adultery Contest

Looking for Love

When I saw you
with my sister
  my heart froze
  I ran

But you followed
begging to come home-- 
sought me--
        this woman you wronged
         the woman humiliated
         the woman shamed
by your flagrant dalliance
       the last of many--
You faced the wrong direction
        your compass spun
         your North was lost.

When you sought
Forgiveness 
Feminine and charitable
Forgiveness laced with softness of a feather
And the flick
Of a fragile wrist
Madness had crept into your blood.

Seeking my forgiveness
was the seeking
of my sharpened friend
Seeking in my direction
You found
The bloody taste
Of my last kiss.

No woman has ever
Killed her 
Lover
So tenderly
and so well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 6:13 AM
killing one softly, with words so potent, only a strong will could write a awesome poem like this... Victoria, you sure are special.....
Williams Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 8:57 AM
Victoria it takes two to tango, did you kiss your sister goodbye? I'm David....
Johnson Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 5:20 PM
and murder bloody murder ,spoke he then from bloody hell...good one babe ...im Don Johnson...be happy ...if ya horse runs off catch another hoss...the cure...4 me anyway..xox
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