Looking For Love

Lonely Louie was looking for love
so he prayed to the Lord up above,
"Please, bring me a missus
who gives lots of kisses
despite what I might be short of!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:15 PM
A Lonely Louie limey, Love It!
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June 19, 2012 at 9:39 AM
gOOd AFTERNOON Rhonda, I was wondering if your on line right now... I did something, and i want to explain.... notify me if you are on line... or reading this comment..xox~pd
Williams Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Rhonda, congrats on your win..David
Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Very funny, Rhonda. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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June 12, 2012 at 7:32 AM
HAHA...very funny Rhonda! Enjoyed your work...congrats!!
Nair Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 6:15 AM
I too wish he gets a missus . Wonder how she makes up for his shortcoming..nice one, Congrats on your win :) Jag
Taylor Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Congrats, Rhonda. Entertaining. Enjoyed. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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June 11, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Thank you*luv~Skat
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June 11, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Thank you*luv~Skat
A   Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 12:51 PM
RHONDA, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK IN SKAT'S CONTEST,,, XOX~PD
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June 5, 2012 at 8:47 PM
Rhonda, looking above ,, might help him find that certain love... excellent..pd
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June 5, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Ha, ha! That is a beautiful Limerick Rhonda! I really enjoyed reading your lovely write! This is a well thought out poem, completely delightful! Great Work!!
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