Looking Cool But Feeling Like a Fool
Surfing with my board
excitement overflows
my heart in time
as my feet carry me
the kicked up sand
the seagulls squawking
as I see the flat water
and realize
the ocean is still.
I am sad i can't surf, but
at least i look cool...
...with my board.
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