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Looking Cool But Feeling Like a Fool

Surfing with my board excitement overflows my heart in time as my feet carry me the kicked up sand the seagulls squawking as I see the flat water and realize the ocean is still. I am sad i can't surf, but at least i look cool... ...with my board.

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Date: 2/7/2011 2:25:00 PM
You have a lot of company. You are just like somebody with a guitar that can't play a note of music. Good descriptiveness here.
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