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Looking Back

Looking back it's no wonder why we had to leave Such rhapsodic idyllic plethora, lost talisman Felicity lost in radiant sapphire dulcet through Our chrysalis once radiant, evenescent, blew .

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/12/2016 7:30:00 AM

Highlander....your words float in heavens only your eyes can see....very fine work....jimbo

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/15/2016 8:42:00 AM

SUCH DEPTH AND BEAUTY IN SO FEW WORDS. I look back far to often and I see missed chances, destroyed dreams and UNFULLFILLED HOPES. A7 "Our chrysalis once radiant, evenescent, blew" Youth and its ignorance astounds us so when we reach old age and look back. Mine was especially ignorant of the blessings of the Light of Truth.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/31/2016 1:53:00 AM

Wow beautiful poetic diction here and sublime in brevity. Kudos for duch gine poetry. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/27/2016 7:12:00 PM

the last one and again interpreted in a very unique way.. =`) Im pleased to read your poem huge James... =`)~Olive Eloisa =`) hugs!xxx

Skat A

Date: 1/27/2016 4:11:00 PM

JAMES, A great pleasure for me to find and read your pen today. Love ** SKAT-