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I got my house in order, and
felt so high and mighty
sun, moon, and stars observed
I knew the rain could soothe my soul
thunder clasped; lightening flashed
my house and I shook with the howling wind
we were no where near completion.

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Date: 5/8/2021 8:01:00 AM
Very often we tend to sit on our laurels, Iris!! ... then we suddenly realize that there is always more to be done (whether it's materialistic, spiritual, etc). ~ A lovely and thought provoking poem, my friend. ~ Best regards // paul
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