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'Onest Orion, like an ugly face draws And night's damp... dawn - dew lies; Therewith, shadows of hallowed mist; I look for you....; You would hold me close; know just what to say. Shadows' world flee,---'N disappear; Ghostly, ---Sounds W'd melt away; And the fear of the unknown--- Pass like brightest day; But,... My Darling, ...I look for you still....and long! It would be divine if you were here, with me; Mine, just mine. My heart would be...Free, and my world --- Angel "right." SO... I'll be back again...tomorrow night; --- Looking

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Date: 5/5/2016 1:17:00 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:46:00 AM
Betty Burdette, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:32:00 PM
Hello Betty, this is excellent. I can see the imagery quite clearly. I like the way your words praises flow. If you would like to read some more of my haiku poems, check out my blog on my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award." Great job! ~Joseph
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