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looking here looking there take a breath scared to death of the what is happening waiting for the ending trying to see everything you've done to me in a better light trying to make it all alright but I can't take away the hurt feeling like dirt the silence between us the lost trust going day by day trying to find my way away from here to a place I shall not fear where I will not shed a tear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2012 6:04:00 PM
I loved this one amber, very good poem and well written! xoxo Laila
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Date: 9/4/2011 12:00:00 AM
I can feel the hurt and pain in your words...I hope that everything works towards the greater good :)
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Date: 9/1/2011 7:58:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Amber. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 2:30:00 PM
I think we all search for that place Amber.. This is beautifully written.. Enjoyed this tonight ;) Wilma
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