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The pain inside The tears I cry The hate and pain The sadness and shame No joy at all No time to fall Keep going till the day is done To find my number one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/27/2009 2:02:00 PM
You are #1 that's where to begin...then add 1 Light & Love
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Date: 4/11/2009 11:42:00 PM
Beautiful I love it...
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:32:00 AM
...and you certainly will... when you least expect it. God bless, Keith
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:00:00 PM
Very powerful write, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week...I hope you find your number one, I hope I find mine too...God Bless *Tyesha
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Date: 1/22/2009 10:10:00 AM
Congrats Megan on "Looking" being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:09:00 AM
Megan - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/19/2009 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write. Love, shar
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