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Lookin' Fer Some Way To Scribe

I set out lookin' fer some way to scribe,
that wer' a different, en catch yarn ear
Well first I'd try, 'ee hollerin' a rhyme,
with all CAPS, this only brought er tear,

This started me a thinkin' too look
elce-where, excep', per'aps this prose
isn't fer me, many have written 'ay book'
I'll need my style, somethin' too share

Sure fer this, they will laugh till they pee,
wouldn't it be a blessin', in this puddle
of tryin', findin' a style suited, right fer me
per'aps I'll be better off, an only doodle

keepin' this in mind, I started, I writ'
writ', en rewrit', like ne're before,
poundin' on my KeyPad, till all fingers,
akein' back, big butt twer'z bone sore,

So, If only I could catch er great line
if it wer' different, silly, too catch one's eye
I'd show 'em, too smile, durin' my life time
attain fame, per'aps, er piece of 'ee pie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Fun to reread.
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October 17, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Thank You Richard for your comment - Stay Safe too!
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September 2, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Very nice! written a decade ago! Enjoyed read and story! Best wishes, and respect.
Campanella Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Thank You - Abdullah for your time to review my poem - Time will fly - my Poem Book is ready now! Stay Safe too!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:43 AM
This is a fun one. Good story and character.
Campanella Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 9:40 AM
Tom Thank You, for your time to review my poem.
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July 28, 2013 at 4:22 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
Campanella Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:32 AM
Hello! Sean L Sanders - Thank you for your comment and time to review my Poetry
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July 27, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Hi Perry, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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July 30, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Thank You - Destroyer - For your time to view my Poetry
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July 21, 2013 at 5:32 AM
- Hello new member: Perry - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - It's nice to be able to read your first poem. - You write very well, I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 30, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Hi! Anne Lise Andresen - Thank you for your comment and your review
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July 20, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Hi Perry, :- ), :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
Campanella Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:42 AM
Hello! SKAT - OZ - Thank You - very nice comment, my first proclaimed Fan - Sweet - also for your time to review my Poetry
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July 20, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Perry, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
Campanella Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:38 AM
Hello! LINDA - Thank you for your time to review my Poems
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July 20, 2013 at 12:27 PM
After commenting I went to look for more of yours but you're new. Welcome to PoetrySoup. May you spend many happy hours here. :)
Campanella Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Hi delysia hendricks - Thank you I will review yours too
Hendricks Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 12:25 PM
hahaha. Muuuchly goodly verse, Perry. I enjoyed reading this highly entertaining piece. :)
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July 30, 2013 at 6:25 AM
Hi Delysia - Thank you for your comment and your time to review my poem
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