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Lookin' Fer Some Way To Scribe

I set out lookin' fer some way to scribe,
that wer' a different, en catch yarn ear
Well first I'd try, 'ee hollerin' a rhyme,
with all CAPS, this only brought er tear,

This started me a thinkin' too look
elce-where, excep', per'aps this prose
isn't fer me, many have written 'ay book'
I'll need my style, somethin' too share

Sure fer this, they will laugh till they pee,
wouldn't it be a blessin', in this puddle
of tryin', findin' a style suited, right fer me
per'aps I'll be better off, an only doodle

keepin' this in mind, I started, I writ'
writ', en rewrit', like ne're before,
poundin' on my KeyPad, till all fingers,
akein' back, big butt twer'z bone sore,

So, If only I could catch er great line
if it wer' different, silly, too catch one's eye
I'd show 'em, too smile, durin' my life time
attain fame, per'aps, er piece of 'ee pie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2013 4:22:00 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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Perry Campanella
Date: 7/30/2013 6:32:00 AM
Hello! Sean L Sanders - Thank you for your comment and time to review my Poetry
Date: 7/27/2013 9:46:00 PM
Hi Perry, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:29:00 AM
Thank You - Destroyer - For your time to view my Poetry
Date: 7/21/2013 5:32:00 AM
- Hello new member: Perry - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - It's nice to be able to read your first poem. - You write very well, I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Perry Campanella
Date: 7/30/2013 6:35:00 AM
Hi! Anne Lise Andresen - Thank you for your comment and your review
Date: 7/20/2013 2:55:00 PM
Hi Perry, :- ), :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Perry Campanella
Date: 7/30/2013 6:42:00 AM
Hello! SKAT - OZ - Thank You - very nice comment, my first proclaimed Fan - Sweet - also for your time to review my Poetry
Date: 7/20/2013 1:24:00 PM
Perry, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Perry Campanella
Date: 7/30/2013 6:38:00 AM
Hello! LINDA - Thank you for your time to review my Poems
Date: 7/20/2013 12:27:00 PM
After commenting I went to look for more of yours but you're new. Welcome to PoetrySoup. May you spend many happy hours here. :)
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Perry Campanella
Date: 7/30/2013 6:27:00 AM
Hi delysia hendricks - Thank you I will review yours too
Date: 7/20/2013 12:25:00 PM
hahaha. Muuuchly goodly verse, Perry. I enjoyed reading this highly entertaining piece. :)
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Perry Campanella
Date: 7/30/2013 6:25:00 AM
Hi Delysia - Thank you for your comment and your time to review my poem