Look Up

 English sonnet

I'm way down here, once more ensnared in pits of my own choice
because I picked that shovel up, my shovel of revolt.
Lord, did you hear me thrash about, unmindful of Your voice,
when I began to tunnel down, the tunnel of a dolt?

Like Jonah long ago, I plunged and trouble follows me.
While in the deep, I find myself quite paralyzed by screams.
But when the dream is done, thank God, your eyes have helped me see. 
Once I awake, Your light exposes foolish, willful schemes.

If I'd not made the journey down to worry, guilt and doubt,
I could not see Your advent bright in rays of morning sun,
I would not know Your upward pull and what You're all about -
forgiveness, grace, a clear, straight path.  My nights of mourning gone.

When debt and darkness, fear and flight detain me in their sway
I pause awhile to recognize - the Truth, the Light, the Way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/10/2025 6:28:00 AM
Entered in Tom Woody's contest: I Choose to Dwell in the Clouds
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Date: 11/19/2014 12:33:00 AM
Congratulations Reason for your high marks in my contest. A first place win you grace... Verlena
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Date: 11/11/2014 10:53:00 AM
Nice write on faith, congrats on the win,
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Date: 11/10/2014 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Reason. My faith helps discern who I am and who I want to be. My greatest wish is to love everyone as Christ did, But because I am human I have to work at this.
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Date: 11/1/2014 7:45:00 PM
A beautiful story of faith and how it can lead you through the darkest night. It is always there for us shining brightly.
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:08:00 AM
thanks, Brenda, I always look forward to your positive comments especially since many of them come before the contest is judged. I can tell you are a woman of faith by the comments you make (on other's poetry as well).
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