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Look Into My Eyes - Triplet Poetry

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(Triplet poetry~ When I see your smile my troubles go ‘way Take my hand since you already have my heart And for a long time I gave you my love too. No other love like yours I've ever really known Come with me and never let's us be apart Your love's fire fed my heart and made it grown. Through life we'll journey this road together And all my love I'll give to you alone Just to keep and to cherish you forever. And my heart and love I trust you to keep Always closely to your own heart and soul Look into my eyes see my love for you so deep. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October,23,2014

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Skat A

Date: 6/2/2015 11:39:00 PM

DORIAN, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/27/2014 4:19:00 AM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:00:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Ravi,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2014 6:16:00 PM

Dorian, so much love in this write a love for their soul mate. :) love and hugs eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:58:00 PM

Thank you so kindly ,Eve,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/26/2014 3:15:00 PM

Dorian this is a whole some work of passion, devotional love, enjoyed it alot, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thank you so kindly ,Cheri,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2014 1:27:00 PM

Ahh!! Romantic lines that you have penned..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thank you so kindly ,Sara,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/24/2014 6:48:00 AM

A very romantic and tender poem promising love eternal in a unique inspiring way, dear Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:56:00 PM

Thank you so kindly ,Demetrios,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/23/2014 5:35:00 PM

Sweet, heartfelt and from the center of your being...I am sure that someone appreciates it.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:55:00 PM

Thank you so kindly ,M.L. Kiser,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/23/2014 3:02:00 PM

dazzling piece of writing dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:54:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Liam ,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/23/2014 7:35:00 AM

Dorian, this is such a beautiful poem from your heart that is so wonderfully expressed. Hugs, Sandra

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:54:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Sandra,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Sandip Goswami

Date: 10/23/2014 5:33:00 AM

Lovely penned...Soft, warmth and innocent love...Best to you...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Sandip,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2014 3:24:00 AM

- Oh .... this is really beautiful Dorian - real love deeply from your heart and soul !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:52:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Anne- Lise,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D