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Look Into My Eyes - Triplet Poetry

(Triplet poetry~ 


When I see your smile my troubles go ‘way 
Take my hand since you already have my heart 
And for a long time I gave you my love too. 

No other love like yours I've ever really known 
Come with me and never let's us be apart 
Your love's fire fed my heart and made it grown. 

Through life we'll journey this road together 
And all my love I'll give to you alone 
Just to keep and to cherish you forever. 

And my heart and love I trust you to keep 
Always closely to your own heart and soul 
Look into my eyes see my love for you so deep. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 

October,23,2014

Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2014

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Skat A Date: 6/2/2015 11:39:00 PM DORIAN, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/27/2014 4:19:00 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 9:00:00 PM Thank you so kindly, Ravi,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Eve Roper Date: 10/26/2014 6:16:00 PM Dorian, so much love in this write a love for their soul mate. :) love and hugs eve Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:58:00 PM Thank you so kindly ,Eve,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Cherl Dunn Date: 10/26/2014 3:15:00 PM Dorian this is a whole some work of passion, devotional love, enjoyed it alot, cheri Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:57:00 PM Thank you so kindly ,Cheri,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/24/2014 1:27:00 PM Ahh!! Romantic lines that you have penned..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:57:00 PM Thank you so kindly ,Sara,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/24/2014 6:48:00 AM A very romantic and tender poem promising love eternal in a unique inspiring way, dear Dorian! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:56:00 PM Thank you so kindly ,Demetrios,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D

M. L. Kiser Date: 10/23/2014 5:35:00 PM Sweet, heartfelt and from the center of your being...I am sure that someone appreciates it. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:55:00 PM Thank you so kindly ,M.L. Kiser,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/23/2014 3:02:00 PM dazzling piece of writing dorian Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:54:00 PM Thank you so kindly, Liam ,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D

Sandra Haight Date: 10/23/2014 7:35:00 AM Dorian, this is such a beautiful poem from your heart that is so wonderfully expressed. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:54:00 PM Thank you so kindly, Sandra,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Sandip Goswami Date: 10/23/2014 5:33:00 AM Lovely penned...Soft, warmth and innocent love...Best to you... Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:53:00 PM Thank you so kindly, Sandip,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2014 3:24:00 AM - Oh .... this is really beautiful Dorian - real love deeply from your heart and soul !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2015 8:52:00 PM Thank you so kindly, Anne- Lise,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D