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Look For Dad

Remember when I was in third grade, my first “pas seul” in basic ballet. Off stage, I was nervous, blinded by the spotlights. I had learned my routine like a book, and Mom's words came to mind, “Look for Dad.” His face shown like a star. Past the forest of faceless figures, you both were standing right where you said you would be. I knew that you were praying for me. that was all I needed to blossom. April 12, 2023 an unrhymed, triquain swirl, syllables 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3 Sponsor John lawless Contest Name SIMPLY POETRY 2

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Date: 4/25/2023 6:34:00 AM
A sweet write for a youth in a first recital. I always looked for my parents, and they were always there for me. I like this one Reason. :)
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Date: 4/21/2023 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/story. A wonderful memory to have. Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 4/21/2023 10:57:00 AM
I thank you Paula for your support and encouragement. It means a lot.
Date: 4/20/2023 2:50:00 PM
The first and last lines sum up the moment and the prayer..."REMEMBER TO BLOSSOM"....Nicely done and thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 4/21/2023 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, John for placement in your contest. I appreciate your hosting and welcome the comment you left. Have a great rest of April, may there be much blossoming to enjoy.

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