look closely

invisible men see through nakedness ~ they do not need x-ray specs 

said the wife to her unfaithful husband ~ she was laid bare on her ex

allusionbetrayalperspectivemonoku

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Linda Alice Fowler

June 15, 2024 at 4:51 PM

A turning of the other cheek, as it were. Stir it up David! :)

David Kavanagh

June 16, 2024 at 4:14 AM

Stirring comment Linda, he got his just desserts, turn the other cheek indeed, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

May 30, 2024 at 10:59 PM

What goes around comes to the around, play with fire, you're going to get burnt lol. Hope you're keeping well David just back from Turkey. Tom

David Kavanagh

May 31, 2024 at 6:17 AM

Hey Tom are we still allowed to call it Turkey, you know with all this PC nonsense going around these days lol! No you’re definitely right, he’ll hath no fury/flames like a woman scorned, hope you had a great time in Türkiye! Haha, cheers David

I Am Anaya

May 29, 2024 at 5:41 PM

Here it goes--she bared her soul to a louse of a spouse, now ex. Although this is out of my depth, David, I somehow sense that he is suffering.

I Am Anaya

May 30, 2024 at 11:53 AM

I think of the first line humorous...secondly if you can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with, why not. We all have a little of Lilith within her.

David Kavanagh

May 30, 2024 at 12:52 AM

Yes he was a cheating louse Anaya, and got his comeuppance when walking in on his wife (maybe estranged) see reply to Kim below, for one scenario, any further scenarios I’ll leave to the readers imagination lol! Cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

May 29, 2024 at 2:13 PM

A lot to take in, with this brief interlude! X, sex, ex…she is a real prize…lol

David Kavanagh

May 30, 2024 at 12:39 AM

All metaphorical of course Kim, her cheating husband has become invisible to her, so much so, she purposely let him catch her in bed with her Ex, even through the sheets (if indeed any were present) he could see exactly what was going on, lol! Cheers David