Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Look Both Ways

I looked up and saw the universe
    it seemed so vast and cold
      unaware of my existence
  Unconcerned about my soul...

  Looking down I saw an ant
    struggling with its load
      Right then and there I knew
  Why purpose God bestows

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Michael Tor February 4, 2023 at 7:24 PM An observation with an intelligent conclusion. Nicely done Gershon...

Shirley Hawkins February 3, 2023 at 6:25 PM So clever and very accurate.

Anselmo Boles February 3, 2023 at 4:28 PM This is the deep thinker in you, coming out of its lair, asking and answering questions, laid bare!...ab Anselmo Boles February 5, 2023 at 4:40 PM Another clever answer, Mr. Tinkerer! Gershon Wolf February 4, 2023 at 7:58 PM This 'deep thinker' likes to tinker.

Beryl Edmonds February 3, 2023 at 3:24 PM Wonderful words Gershon. All creatures great and small God loves them all. As for the universe, what a sight - pure delight, and how about day and night? ~ Belle Gershon Wolf February 4, 2023 at 8:02 PM Always a pleasure to read your rhymed treasure, Belle!

J. Summers February 3, 2023 at 3:23 PM Awesome write Gershon and most perceptive. John Gershon Wolf February 4, 2023 at 8:01 PM Appreciate the encouragement, John!

Kim Rodrigues February 3, 2023 at 2:59 PM We can learn so much when we take our eyes off the problem. Gershon Wolf February 4, 2023 at 7:45 PM Interesting comment there, Kim! Thanks!