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Look Both Ways

I looked up and saw the universe it seemed so vast and cold unaware of my existence Unconcerned about my soul... Looking down I saw an ant struggling with its load Right then and there I knew Why purpose God bestows

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:24:00 PM
An observation with an intelligent conclusion. Nicely done Gershon...
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Date: 2/3/2023 6:25:00 PM
So clever and very accurate.
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Date: 2/3/2023 4:28:00 PM
This is the deep thinker in you, coming out of its lair, asking and answering questions, laid bare!...ab
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/5/2023 4:40:00 PM
Another clever answer, Mr. Tinkerer!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2023 7:58:00 PM
This 'deep thinker' likes to tinker.
Date: 2/3/2023 3:24:00 PM
Wonderful words Gershon. All creatures great and small God loves them all. As for the universe, what a sight - pure delight, and how about day and night? ~ Belle
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2023 8:02:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read your rhymed treasure, Belle!
Date: 2/3/2023 3:23:00 PM
Awesome write Gershon and most perceptive. John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2023 8:01:00 PM
Appreciate the encouragement, John!
Date: 2/3/2023 2:59:00 PM
We can learn so much when we take our eyes off the problem.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2023 7:45:00 PM
Interesting comment there, Kim! Thanks!

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