Look At You

Look at you looking at me
My only son’s one son
A very cute mini version of me
A new generation to carry on my name
Your whole life ahead of you

Look at you looking at me
Eyes glowing with possibilities
Your mind a clean blank slate
Our future in your generation’s hands
And here you are with your whole hand 
Wrapped around my baby finger

Look at you looking at me
The perfect smile of innocence
Radiant and in real time
Don’t know who is more in awe
The grandpa or the child              



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~RANDOM MUSINGS VOL.3~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on February 16, 2020 for contest LOOK AT YOU sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcguire Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Love it! I have 12 grandchildren
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Wow~ that alone is an awesome legacy, Timothy.
Roy Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:10 PM
Feel the enjoyment, Gauthier. Four weeks back I was blessed with a grand-daughter. God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations, Pratap. Most appreciated.
Achilles Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 7:16 AM
lovely, so lovely, just so moving, grandchildren such a joy, Julie
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much, Julie, for your lovely visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Grandchildren are a gift to our age to cheer us up and carry us to more exercising.
Bauer Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 5:45 PM
this is charming and delightful, line! i can relate to it - you've captured that feeling very well...
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 9:42 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ilene. Most appreciated.
DiMino Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Very beautiful! Sincere and heartfelt. Bravo!
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 3:34 PM
Thank you, Joe. Most appreciated.
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