Look At What I Found

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This summer sure is real hot Look I just found the jackpot Lots of cool water I could be an otter This pool is a big blue pot

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/6/2024 4:46:00 PM

I have not swam in a pool in years. I would enjoy being an otter I bet, right about July. There is a park nearby where I can watch them play. They are so funny. I would jump right in and swim around. This was a sweet poem and I liked it so much Paula.

Chantelle Cooke

Date: 8/10/2024 8:10:00 PM

Ah! Such a joyful Limerick. Reminds me of my childhood free days! I'm so glad to see all your writing styles in many poetry forms! Again a delightful read. Blessings and love to you Chantelle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2024 8:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun Limerick write & found it to be a delightful read. It was fun to write. I enjoy trying many different writing styles. Some I like better then others. It is so good to see you back here. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away..........................

Len Gasun

Date: 7/28/2024 7:51:00 PM

Gorgeous limerick from the picture prompt my dearest poet friend! I love your idea here. I tried this challenge too. But mine could be dark or light, depending on the interpretation/perception of the reader. I just tried for fun. Thank you so much for sharing my dearest friend. Hope you're doing well. take care and good luck to both of us. Thanks a lot for sharing and God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 10:33:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun Limerick write for this fun picture. I am well/blessed/busy. Hope all is OK with you. Yes, good luck to both of us in this fun contest. Hugs.. Have a fun day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2024 9:37:00 AM

Look At What I Found ~ Date Written: 7/26/2024