Look At Me

i curl your 
long dark hair in my fingers
at your neck
as I pull you down
I wait to feel the rough end of day
beard
on my face
your eyes close a little then open
to watch me
look at me, I whisper
dont stop
looking at me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryusaka Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 7:28 PM
I love the ending of this poem so much... Veronica, your style is amazing. Great job.
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 5:18 AM
I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Veronica. I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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August 25, 2009 at 5:44 PM
deeply powerful emotion concentrated in the simplicity of form magnified in the anticipated momentof every word screems yes line2 i feel emphises better on hair -- hair long dark in my fingers radiates outward from the central theme twith enhancement...........o
Culverhouse Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 3:37 PM
you go, sounds sensual
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