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LOOK: Thanks to him I'm going insane I imagine him every night before I sleep His eyes linger in the front of my mind His smile rests under my eyelids His touch send electric currents through my body His girlfriend wouldn't mind if I stole him She doesn't love him anyway His lips brush mine Making me gasp for air His embrace reassures me Soothes my nerves He loves me Or so he says Now he's mine and mine alone Nobody else can claim him Kisses everyday Love 24/7 Now he's mine And I'm sane again OKAY SO THIS HAS NEVER HAPPENED!IT'S MY FIRST POEM EVER!!!! WATCHA THINK?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/24/2008 12:45:00 PM
You did a wonderful job with this poem. Keep writing...it can do wonders for the soul! Thank you for your kind words on my blog. You will find friends here...so hang in there and stay well. ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/23/2008 1:03:00 PM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. It certainly has a passionate touch. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/23/2008 11:26:00 AM
This is clear and your thoughts flow smoothly expressing the feelings of the author or subject very well, making for a good read. Michael
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