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Thanks to him I'm going insane
I imagine him every night before I sleep
His eyes linger in the front of my mind
His smile rests under my eyelids
His touch send electric currents through my body

His girlfriend wouldn't mind if I stole him
She doesn't love him anyway

His lips brush mine
Making me gasp for air
His embrace reassures me
Soothes my nerves

He loves me
Or so he says

Now he's mine and mine alone
Nobody else can claim him

Kisses everyday 
Love 24/7

Now he's mine
And I'm sane again



OKAY SO THIS HAS NEVER HAPPENED!IT'S MY FIRST POEM EVER!!!!
WATCHA THINK?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/24/2008 12:45:00 PM
You did a wonderful job with this poem. Keep writing...it can do wonders for the soul! Thank you for your kind words on my blog. You will find friends here...so hang in there and stay well. ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/23/2008 1:03:00 PM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. It certainly has a passionate touch. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/23/2008 11:26:00 AM
This is clear and your thoughts flow smoothly expressing the feelings of the author or subject very well, making for a good read. Michael
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