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Lonley Echos

The sun sets in the west as you walk out the door. I stand here unsure how I feel. Not sad not happy, just a little numb. You’ve been my whole world for so long and now my whole world just walked out the door and I don’t feel a thing. You turn and look at me the tear in your eye hits me like a punch in the gut. You tell me you love me and I tell you the same is it true or is it a lie we tell each other to ease the pain. I can’t tell. As you walk to your car I close the door as I stand alone I here you drive away. As the sound of your car fades in the distance. It hits me. Alone in the silence. There is no victory in this battle of hearts. Just the lonely echo of what was and what can never be again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/8/2010 4:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:12:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Oleta. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:13:00 AM
Enjoyed this write and the revelation at the end. Brought the entire write together.
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