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Long-Leaf Pines

muddy, dying pond
green confronts cloudless blue sky
my dog sniffs and snoops

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Kim Merryman

June 16, 2015 at 10:59 AM

Great visual, Tim! Congrats on your placement! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

June 15, 2015 at 8:41 PM

Nice win, Luv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2015 at 11:24 AM

oh that is a fun one, the ending of it!! congrats, Tim.

Shadow Hamilton

June 14, 2015 at 5:22 AM

good haiku Tim last line is gross lol congrats on placing hugs

Skat A

June 13, 2015 at 9:03 PM

Tim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Tim Ryerson

June 14, 2015 at 3:23 PM

Thanks SKAT and if I haven't said so before, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my old poems...

Skat A

May 26, 2015 at 11:59 PM

enjoying nature one way or the other

Joyce Johnson

April 1, 2014 at 6:08 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

April 1, 2014 at 2:29 AM

congratulations Tim xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 1, 2014 at 2:03 AM

Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, tim

Poet Destroyer A

March 31, 2014 at 9:39 PM

TIM, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA

Nicole Sharon Brown

November 17, 2009 at 6:09 AM

This reminds me of home the region where I grew up is known for their beautiful pines and the big dogs that snoop around! LOL!

Barbara Gorelick

November 8, 2009 at 5:17 PM

Perfect picture! Second line a winner. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

November 8, 2009 at 10:53 AM

Very beautiful haiku, Tim! I love the way the dogs seem as intrigued by the reader by this image. Wonderful work and a favorite for me! Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo

November 8, 2009 at 10:52 AM

nice! a wonderful Haiku Tim. Thanks for the visit and kind comments also ;)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 8, 2009 at 3:57 AM

Tim, I really love this haiku. I can see a floppy eared dog sniffing around the edges of a small pond that reflects the surrounding pines and clouds above. Excellent imagery. Lovingly, Dane Soupmail