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yearning of ritual lethargic in thunderstorm through huge chasm of window& watching sky darkened & drizzle dropping & gust howling non-stop yet stipulating coldness within intimacy& a glimpse charming longing for flowers blooming rooting in womb relishing drafting sun and moon elysian fields of yesteryear & blue oceans crave scooting & alleging obsession musings notification compelling 1St place contest winner Written: August 1st, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 8/9/2022 12:04:00 PM

Belated congratulations for this aesthetic and creatively creative pragmatic share... Regards

Michael Tor

Date: 8/7/2022 9:56:00 PM

What a great difficult form Lasaad that you have mastered congratulations on this magnificent Poetry of yours my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/5/2022 8:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win. A great write. Love It. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend with your wonderful win.................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/5/2022 4:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Quite an interesting form....very unique! :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/3/2022 12:12:00 PM

Congrats on your trophy win! Very nice!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2022 10:54:00 AM

Lasaad, congratulations on your trophy win with this most creative poetic form that is filled with dynamic imagery and energy like the storm! I agree with Greg when he says "knowing more forms makes a better poet." Thank you for your contribution to the poetry world! Blessings!

Greg Gaul

Date: 8/3/2022 9:53:00 AM

If I have learned anything about poetry in recent years, it is that there is a form for everyone. I applaud your reaching out and stretching for something new. Knowing more forms makes the poet better, no doubt. Congratulations on your winning placement. Beating out Roy Boy is no easy task, I assure you. Enjoy.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/3/2022 9:36:00 AM

Most Interesting Charming Style Big CONGRATS to win TOP. Blessings

Valsa George

Date: 8/3/2022 3:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy win dear friend ! I am so happy for you !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2022 1:31:00 PM

Interesting form. I really like the pattern it creates.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/2/2022 6:22:00 AM

Kudos to you my friend. You and Brian operate on same wavelength--you are now an expert on this form.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/2/2022 1:16:00 AM

That's how one feels when one is on a flight inn glory.

Valsa George

Date: 8/1/2022 9:49:00 PM

This is indeed an engmatic form I am not able to grasp, but I know for sure these broken lines hold a violley of meanings ! All the Best in Brian's contest dear friend !

Valsa George
Date: 8/3/2022 3:50:00 AM

Thank yu so much for your willingness to help me. Even if you try, I don't think I will be able to master this difficult form ! I am used to very simple way of writing.So please forget about it. Besides, my soupmail is not functional .....

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/2/2022 6:08:00 AM

Your kind sentiments are very much appreciated, however, I was unable to send you an email about the subject. Could you kindly let me know if there are any other options? I would want to share some insight with you. I am certain that you will be capable of doing even more admirably than I have once you grasp it properly. Kindest regards dear friend.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/1/2022 5:57:00 PM

I didn't get your heavenly yearning my friend, even though it's full of relishing words ... and I certainly do not get brian strand contests every other day... how can he do it?... have you read some of his writings?

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/3/2022 12:08:00 AM

What a nice gentleman you are...

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/2/2022 6:20:00 AM

I am delighted to you, Pashang, for the kind words you have provided. If you keep reading Brian's poetry, I have no doubt that you will eventually be able to understand what they are trying to say. Also, give this organic form a go; you might end up comprehending what you're reading this time. There are no impossible tasks.