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Longing For You

Muddy road cracks Past rural fields Lined with dust, Gnarled willows: And evening fog thickens While unalterable silken ivy Reminds me... Of all our moonlights back. 8-Line Poem 1-5 words per line For Rick Parise 11/9/2017

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Date: 11/9/2017 7:54:00 AM
A rare poetic sense, flawless. Love.
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:26:00 PM
Your verse flows beautifully Nette...best wishes
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:22:00 PM
A beautiful melancholy reverie Nette. Lovely and sad imagery. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette, hugs Eve
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:12:00 PM
beautifully romantic, good luck in contest,
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:15:00 PM
This is so beautiful, you captured my imagination with this delightful write my friend! You have inspired me to try out this contest for myself, quite the intriguing contest, and you have written such a perfect poem for it...very meaningful! I really loved reading your amazing piece here this afternoon! What a grand write! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:04:00 PM
Nette, a lovely write dear heart !
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:47:00 PM
Exquisitely penned! The poignant and soft images make this a memorable read!
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:25:00 PM
Lovely words of longing --best for a win, nette!
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