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Longing For You

Muddy road  cracks
Past rural fields
Lined with dust,
Gnarled willows:

And evening fog  thickens
While unalterable silken ivy
Reminds me...

Of all our moonlights back.



8-Line Poem  1-5 words per line
For Rick Parise    11/9/2017

lonelinessmissing youfree verse

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 9, 2017 at 7:54 AM

A rare poetic sense, flawless. Love.

Joseph May

November 8, 2017 at 9:26 PM

Your verse flows beautifully Nette...best wishes

Susan Ashley

November 8, 2017 at 9:22 PM

A beautiful melancholy reverie Nette. Lovely and sad imagery. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

Eve Roper

November 8, 2017 at 8:37 PM

Beautiful, Nette, hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso

November 8, 2017 at 6:12 PM

beautifully romantic, good luck in contest,

Russell Sivey

November 8, 2017 at 2:15 PM

This is so beautiful, you captured my imagination with this delightful write my friend! You have inspired me to try out this contest for myself, quite the intriguing contest, and you have written such a perfect poem for it...very meaningful! I really loved reading your amazing piece here this afternoon! What a grand write! Great Work!!