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Longing For the Ride

Majestic he stands Head held high and proud Until I draw near tack in hand His mussel to my chest he bows Our eyes fixed With deepest affection Respect from me From him acceptance His nostrils flair He inhales my scent A bond beyond fences A mutual consent About horse and rider How can I explain This communion of splendor Perpetually sustained With reverent candor Can any man compare Who would be considered grander Horse or rider if you dare Nobility without pride Beauty without vanity Majesty without disciple Power without violence Do you still wonder why I'm longing for the ride When he challenges the wind for speed Brushed by heaven with every stride Intimacy mounted here on "Spirit's Pride" My steed and I in harmony Exhilaration captivates my senses Pounding hooves, his earthen scent Taut muscles ripple in sweat profusely drenched He heeds the slightest touch of rein His saddle is my alter of prayer When he on oceans sands a trot My soul is healed all disrepair In bed I lay awake tonight my mind a heavy load His blaze is blazoned in my memory burned Of black night mane and chestnut coat A quatrain tribute to his name he's earned Still you may not understand This yearning so many take in stride Of horse and rider pure joy provider And oh such longing for the ride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/12/2016 11:02:00 AM
"His mussel to my chest he bows" - can someone decipher this to me? specifically the word "mussel" thanks. btw.. I love this poem
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:35:00 AM
- A very beautiful poem Sarai !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 9:08:00 PM
i grew up around horses as i had many friends that rode... their is something beautuful shared between the horse and rider....great write :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 6:42:00 AM
You are an exceptional poetess my dear Sarai! No matter what you write about, your loving soul always comes shining through! This one is just beautiful and no exception... I am soooo impressed, my new found loving soul! Loving hugs, Jack xox
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/16/2013 11:22:00 AM
Sweet Jack, You make my mornings a summer day no matter what the season is! Your kindness is energizing my friend <3
Date: 11/15/2013 8:47:00 PM
I absolutely love this. The bond that can be encouraged between horses and ourselves exceeds then transcends all expectations. It's love ineffable.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/16/2013 11:18:00 AM
Ah... Love ineffable! How I love your choice of words So true so true. Love your writing my friend
Date: 11/15/2013 12:58:00 PM
Acceptance. Lovely theme and lovely poem. It was A delightful write! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/16/2013 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Juli-Michelle Yes acceptance from something whose power on every level so surpasses our own on so many levels is truly a glorious thing! Thanks for stopping by my dear <3
Date: 11/15/2013 7:37:00 AM
Ride on. Ride on! Love this. "Brushed by heaven with every stride"...vital line. In Puerto Rico, where I'm from, it's all about the Paso Finos. If you don't know about those kinds of horses, look them up. They're very majestic. This was a very enjoyable read!
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Poet Tacito
Date: 11/18/2013 4:04:00 PM
You're very welcome. =D
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/16/2013 11:08:00 AM
Oh, I looked them up, My God! They are magnificent creatures... Thanks for enlightening me to them. Have a wonderful weekend my friend
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/15/2013 8:48:00 AM
Why thank you my friend. No I haven't heard of them but will be looking forward to discovering more about them. Have an amazing day!

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