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Longing For Love

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Lightly touched in soft sapphire skies
the deep blue of those loving eyes
Hair flows upon sun kissed skin
through flowers and back again
I feel your smile, even then
wrapping the beauty within
Lightly touched in soft sapphire skies
the deep blue of those loving eyes

Roses glisten in morning dew
rare beauty begins shining through
Simple pleasures meant for me
in your smile so peacefully
Feels divine and heavenly
gentle touch, as love can be
Roses glisten in morning dew
rare beauty begins shining through

Elegance feathered in the breeze
gracefully touching me with ease
Beautiful smile I adore
a touch of warmth, as before
Always, I am wanting more
your love, I am longing for
Elegance feathered in the breeze
gracefully touching me with ease
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 A Romantic Scribble
    Form- Octelle

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Anonomus Scorpio March 8, 2023 at 6:52 PM I read this no less than 12 times! This is astonishingly beautiful clear clean and pure! I read something once that sums up exactly how I feel about this poem,Oh here it is......"Elegance feathered in the breeze gracefully touching me with ease" Warmest Regards A.S. Brandy Nicole March 10, 2023 at 5:39 PM I'm in complete awe with you saying that you've read this 12 times. My heart is smiling and fluttering, all at the same time. :) So sweet of you to repeat a line from the poem saying this is how you feel about it. Thank you, A.S. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Rob Levasseur December 27, 2020 at 1:01 PM It is uncanny how your voice and tone changes from poem to poem. This one simply is whispering to me. So lovely, the rhyming is near-perfect. (Just a few little hiccups with the syllables, but in no way detracts from he entire structure.) Brandy Nicole December 27, 2020 at 7:15 PM Words whispering is a very good thing. Yes, my voice may change- the tone in each poem. All are written from the heart. Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you, Rob. I enjoy using this form at times. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Paul Schneiter March 23, 2020 at 10:18 PM In case someone has even a thread of doubt as to what constitutes authentic, world-class poetry, refer that "someone" to the foregoing "scribble." All doubt, however entrenched, will be summarily dissipated. * * * Standing applause for Brandy. Hugs, Paul Brandy Nicole March 23, 2020 at 10:37 PM Dear Paul, you leave me almost speechless. Oh my!! This isn't world class poetry, just thoughts from my heart. I appreciate your kind words about me and my poetry. You place me higher than I deserve. Deep sigh. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves December 6, 2019 at 3:45 PM Wow now this is a masterpiece waiting to be discovered... Awesomely... Awesomely done. Brandy Nicole December 6, 2019 at 8:25 PM "A masterpiece waiting to be discovered" Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Robert. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

John Hamilton December 6, 2019 at 10:03 AM Back for a third read, keeps getting better each time, guess I gotta fave this to read over and over! Brandy Nicole December 6, 2019 at 8:22 PM You humble me. Thank you John. I am almost speechless. So kind of you to place this in your favorites. My heart smiles. :) Brandy

John Hamilton December 4, 2019 at 9:42 AM This is a special write...so romantic and dreamy, loved every word, like Rick said ...luscious. Brandy Nicole December 4, 2019 at 8:56 PM Such a wonderful thing to say. This being dreamy, romantic and luscious. Thank you John. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. :) Brandy

Phil Capitano December 1, 2019 at 6:38 AM Deep and delightful "scribble", Brandy, so delicate and divine. Love your repeating lines and the flow is perfect. Wish my scribbles were this good. Write on! Brandy Nicole December 1, 2019 at 7:15 PM Such a wonderful compliment. There is something magical about these words, it seems. Thank you Phil. I appreciate your thoughts. Your words Shine!! :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2019 at 5:50 AM What a luscious write! Hugs Rick. Brandy Nicole December 1, 2019 at 7:11 PM Exactly!! I love being in the Stars. Brandy Nicole November 25, 2019 at 9:14 PM Entertaining Indeed!! Both Tommy and Keith. :) Still deciding- on my Destination. I like both. The Stars and the Sea! :) Brandy Nicole November 25, 2019 at 9:12 PM Thank you Richard!! Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2019 at 6:00 AM The comments with Keith and Tommy were quite entertaining *lol*. Did you choose the ocean or the stars?

Quoth Theraven November 24, 2019 at 11:00 PM Brandy, I can feel the love that burns to morning in this feathered spellbound write. -Richard Brandy Nicole November 25, 2019 at 10:40 PM Such a beautiful thought- poetic even. Thank you Richard. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Jc Hawkens November 22, 2019 at 4:22 PM How beautiful and delicate these wonderful words rhyme. Oh, how I know the longing. You have a wonderful heart and soul. It shows in this Romantic Poem. Thank you for sharing this. Brandy Nicole November 22, 2019 at 7:18 PM I am sure many can relate to these words. Longing holds the heart, touching every emotion. Thank you JC for your lovely comment. Your kind thoughts, about me and my poetry. :) Brandy

Charles Messina November 20, 2019 at 9:07 PM ...and BTW, while Tommy and Keith are still jumping up and down yelling "pick me- pick me! We'll go below deck and sort out the seasick pills (lol) Brandy Nicole November 20, 2019 at 10:58 PM Sure!! Sounds like a plan to me. If Tommy and Keith continue to jump like that- they will get seasick. Yikes!!! :P

Charles Messina November 20, 2019 at 8:57 PM Touching you with ease... Well, I think you have touched us with ease with this beautiful scribble. Gorgeous poetry Brandy. Hugs Charlie Brandy Nicole November 20, 2019 at 10:57 PM Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Charlie. I am just scribbling from my heart. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior November 20, 2019 at 7:14 AM Wowsers!!...a most creative scribble Brandy...I must say, I like this side of you or any side lol...a super fav my elegant feathered friend...^WW^ :o) Brandy Nicole November 20, 2019 at 7:21 PM Your thoughts bring a smile, and a soft giggle. Thank you my Warrior with such Wonderful Wings. :) I promise to be careful floating upon the water. So kind of you to place this in your favorites. I am still floating in the wind, my friend. :) Brandy Winged Warrior November 20, 2019 at 7:16 AM ...love the pic too...careful treading water :o)

Pashang Salehi November 19, 2019 at 12:37 AM Lovely Lovely poem... Pashang Salehi November 20, 2019 at 12:37 AM and I appreciate your thoughts on my poem "revelation"... Pashang Brandy Nicole November 19, 2019 at 9:17 PM Thank you Pashang. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper November 16, 2019 at 10:41 PM very nicely done, Brandy.. is there a gentleman around. Brandy Nicole November 16, 2019 at 10:53 PM Thank you Eve! Yes, there is. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Silent One November 16, 2019 at 12:09 PM Oh...this is possibly the longest poem I've read from you... Nice rhymes and flow which compliment the romantic imagery... Brandy Nicole November 16, 2019 at 7:25 PM I have written and posted a few lengthy poems before. I suppose I like saying more, with less words. Thank you Silent One. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos November 16, 2019 at 8:11 AM I love the ending of your wonderful passionate poem - 'Elegance feathered in the breeze, gracefully touching me with ease' - WOW queen of romantic writes - simply beautiful! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole November 16, 2019 at 7:19 PM Thank you Jennifer. Such a wonderful thing to say. I am just a simple woman writing from the heart. Love and Romance, moments of Passion- are my favorites things to write about. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May November 16, 2019 at 7:32 AM A smile which "wraps the beauty within" with a beautiful delicate touch...Wonderful write Brandy.. Brandy Nicole November 16, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Joseph. A "Smile" is more than just a facial expression. Sooooo much more. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

John Gondolf November 14, 2019 at 8:28 PM A soft and tender piece with a hint of longing. Beautifully written, Brandy. I like this form, I must try it sometime. All my best. Hugs, John Brandy Nicole November 14, 2019 at 10:11 PM Longing holds the heart- sometimes. Thank you John, you and your thoughts are appreciated. Give this form a try, I know you will enjoy the journey. :) Hugs, Brandy

Regina Mcintosh November 14, 2019 at 7:00 AM So beautiful. Just love it. God bless you dear lady... Gina Brandy Nicole November 14, 2019 at 10:00 PM Many wonderful blessings to you!! Thank you Regina, for your kind words. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit November 13, 2019 at 2:13 PM Enjoyed the verses of this romantic write--beautiful tone and flow.. in excellent rhymes..splendidly done, Brandy. I hear the longing in heartbeats of music. Brandy Nicole November 13, 2019 at 8:50 PM So kind of you to say. Thank you Vijay! The melody within, lingers upon the page. Love and that sweet ache. A tender longing. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy