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Longing for closure

sweet tender words may suffice
dreams have a life of their own
only actions go the distance



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025

dreamrelationshipsuccesssweetwordsother

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sara Etgen-Baker

September 9, 2025 at 4:36 PM

insightful, food for thought

Line Gauthier

September 9, 2025 at 9:08 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 9, 2025 at 11:02 AM

Hello Lin, yes only action goes the distance. i agee. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 9, 2025 at 4:44 PM

Hello Lin, Your welcome . Enjoy your evening. Hugs. /Darlene/

Line Gauthier

September 9, 2025 at 3:13 PM

Thanks, Darlene ~ have a great day

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 9, 2025 at 8:00 AM

Hello Line, I love how you progress from words to dreams to actions, showing the hierarchy of what actually creates lasting impact. The middle line "dreams have a life of their own" is so beautifully phrased and captures something about how our aspirations exist in their own realm until we act on them. Excellent! Blessings, Line, Daniel

Line Gauthier

September 9, 2025 at 3:13 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Daniel ~

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