Longing

Longing
Attractive,powerful
Killing,desiring,uplifting
Nice with deadly instincts
Money

Longing
Emotional,passionate
Depressing,soothing,demanding
Affection that brightens soul
Love


CONTEST:"Cinquains" sponsored by Dr.Ram Mehta.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Clever and unique, Olusegun...congrats on a big win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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January 2, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda
Gorelick Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Congrats on a big win..Enjoy! BG
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Nicely won, and congrats to you in this new year.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:22 AM
beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:52 AM
You really crafted this 'Segun,congrats on the win my brother. Eko o ni baje o...huggs
Roberts Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Congratulations....Seren
Mehta Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Olusegun
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 2:41 PM
two very different kinds of longings you discussed. Yes, they both have their good and their bad. merry christmas to YOU, my friend. Hope you are well.
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Very nice pen Olusegun! Very nice cinquain suit, dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you a very Merry Christmas! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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