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Longing






Thou art the whisper of mine heart
                                   A longing that cannot be answered





for Brian Strand's contest:  SUCCINCT a single TWO line verse/any theme

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Date: 12/5/2011 8:57:00 AM
so glad to see this made the winner's list. congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2011 4:55:00 PM
I think we've all experienced longings that cannot be answered...congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:29:00 PM
Beautiful, Lori. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on your poem and your win - nicely done..........George
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Date: 12/1/2011 5:45:00 AM
congratulations to you Lori on this win of yours in Brian's contest! nice job of it
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Date: 12/1/2011 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Succinct" contest Lori. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 2:51:00 AM
Congrats Lori on your win.Very nice Crystalline.
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Date: 11/30/2011 9:38:00 PM
wow, profound and beautiful at the same time. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:50:00 PM
Very succint. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/30/2011 12:52:00 PM
Way to go Lori, nice to see your poem rate top three, Congratulations on your worthy poem.Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/28/2011 8:31:00 AM
aww, so sad. why can't it be answered? i like how your title emphasizes the feeling. good luck in the contest :)
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