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Lori Lucas Mcclure

Poet Crystalline

Longing

Thou art the whisper of mine heart
                                   A longing that cannot be answered





for Brian Strand's contest:  SUCCINCT a single TWO line verse/any theme

Copyright © Lori Lucas Mcclure | Year Posted 2011

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Black Eyed Susan

December 5, 2011 at 8:57 AM

so glad to see this made the winner's list. congrats!

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 3, 2011 at 4:55 PM

I think we've all experienced longings that cannot be answered...congrats on your win in the contest

December 2, 2011 at 10:29 PM

Beautiful, Lori. Congrats on your win. Kim

December 2, 2011 at 10:32 AM

Congrats on your poem and your win - nicely done..........George

Robert A. Dufresne

December 1, 2011 at 5:45 AM

congratulations to you Lori on this win of yours in Brian's contest! nice job of it

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 1, 2011 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Succinct" contest Lori. Love, Carol

December 1, 2011 at 2:51 AM

Congrats Lori on your win.Very nice Crystalline.

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2011 at 9:38 PM

wow, profound and beautiful at the same time. Congrats on your win.

November 30, 2011 at 1:50 PM

Very succint. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

November 30, 2011 at 12:52 PM

Way to go Lori, nice to see your poem rate top three, Congratulations on your worthy poem.Agape, Moses

Black Eyed Susan

November 28, 2011 at 8:31 AM

aww, so sad. why can't it be answered? i like how your title emphasizes the feeling. good luck in the contest :)

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