Longing

I am hunger for his passion therefore for him to hug and kiss me. I will reciprocate. A yearning desire to embrace and kiss him. A torch with burning passion that will never be extinguished until he loves me unconditionally, then make passionate love to me.

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Audonus Taylor

Date: 7/10/2011 1:03:00 PM

Wow, first of all amazing write! Second of all, I'm jealous now lol. I'm having a moment with you through these words of yours and now I'm like I want to be this guy! haha. I'll keep reading but it's causing problems lol. You are just talented, no question about it. I hope you like some of my stuff when you get a chance to read

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 1:31:00 PM

Passionate expressions nicely worded in prose poetry, Sophia. True love should always be unconditional

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2011 11:39:00 AM

I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Sophia. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol