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Longing

it's a longing present... but so present that often frequents us ... A real reminder of something that existed one day and that is still done consistent... Wrapped up is in us, but it is so simple to untie that lies down, sleeps and stretches in our souls ...!

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Date: 12/21/2020 3:45:00 PM
Hello Alakas, yes longing is in us all. Yes it is done consistent. Wrapped up in us and easy to untie. Salute Darlene Merry Christmas. Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/20/2020 2:28:00 PM
very interesting way to express longing as a present!! Loved the metaphor.
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Date: 12/21/2020 5:18:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea, i wish you Very happy Christmas ! salute alkas
Date: 12/20/2020 6:59:00 AM
A very unique and original poem Alkas, very nicely received, Merry Christmas with heart of prayer.
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Date: 12/21/2020 5:21:00 AM
Thank you dear, receive my affection and consideration merry christmas! Salute Mystic Rose Rose alkas

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