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my grandmother who was 99 years old when she passed--just two months shy of her 100th birthday

poem submitted to "Longevity" poetry contest, Sara Kendrick, sponsor, May 29, 2026

LONGEVITY-SK

She moved through years the way dawn moves through lace,  
slowly, delicately, and steady, never in a hurry.  
Her hands learned patience from the cotton fields,  
her voice from hymns that rose in dust and worry.  
Longevity, she said, is earned by grace~  
by choosing kindness even when it aches.  

She taught me how to sit with what is real,  
how sorrow ripens into something bright,  
how time becomes a friend when we let go;  
and in her final days she whispered soft and low,  
life grows long only in those who learn to love its light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "LONGEVITY-SK" is a lovely write with a great picture. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 4:11 PM
I wanted to say thank you for participating in my contest. I am delighted your work ended up on the winners' list. Congratulations..Way to go. This read like she was a special lady. Sara K.
Hind Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 1:26 PM
just beautiful, Sara <3
Gauthier Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 10:05 AM
lovely tribute ~
M  Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 4:46 AM
Aww incredibly beautiful Sara! 99 Wow! Debx
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