Longevity SK

Our heartbeat stalled for a moment,
whence with life extinguished, we fell 
but the Grim Reaper stayed his hand,
placing us back in body shell.

Lost in trance we think not of death,
wishing to live on for all time,
pursuing objects of desire,
heart seeking new mountains to climb.

Befriending the vast, vibrant void,
at source, as the eye of the eye,
becoming the bliss flame itself,
we saw life’s a dream, a big lie.

Who we are is pure living light
and not decaying form of dust;
our quintessence can never die,
nurtured by God, whose touch we trust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Longevity SK" write. FAV for me... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Seeker Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 7:31 PM
I’m happy these words resonated, Paula dear, God bless.
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 12:49 PM
I want to say thank you for entering my contest and congratulations on being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K.
Seeker Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Thanks for hosting and for the placement, Sara.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 1:48 PM
Such a thoughtful and interesting take on the contest theme. Congrats for your win
Seeker Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 10:08 PM
Thank you, Andrea dear, God bless.
George Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 11:03 PM
We never die. Touched by the Living Light, we will live on. Great thoughts.
Seeker Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 11:30 PM
The truth. Yes.
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