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The way of talking is exasperatingly bellicose. The paradigm of longanimity has been dulled. Presence, tragically, can't gather a full megadose. Exceedingly, it is delicate and cracking cold. I was prone to bouts of gloominess and fatigue. More sureness would have been suffering an intrigue. However, I improvised a helping to bestow the way. I steadied my head on someone's shoulder all day. We are all doomed to ruin, It will finally awake an end. We invest such a heroic bid to render what we yield to tend. We yell and scream in agony in an attempt to escape, it's all in vain. Seclusion has owned me, so why should I swallow the pain? Before praising your charm, I had asserted a qualm. I felt as a flimsy leaf hanging from a brittle side, calm. In an accrued state of utter and genuine regret. And bowed over your wicked sight and felt warm abet Trust empowers us to prevail over life's challenges. It reveals the promise to support bloom into large fledges. From seed sown by our parents, as we were conceived. It can foster striving social ills and retain us relieved. Sporadically I expected to shout and unwind. However, I invited someone to listen to me that was kind. Feasibly I wanted a nearer than a partner or brother. Be that as it may, I quite bore one? I called her Mother.
1st place contest winner Written: March 07, 2022 Title Chosen: Longanimity Contest: Pick-A-Title, Vol 29 Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/30/2022 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/wonderful Rhyme write. Love it and the pretty picture. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 3/28/2022 2:07:00 AM
Excellent write and well-deserved win, congratulations.
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:57:00 PM
Very beautiful rhyme written in a flawlessly flowing manner. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2022 7:56:00 PM
I wonder how I missed this great poem."Sporadically I expected to shout and unwind. However, I invited someone to listen to me that was kind". To shout and scream or slip into gloom is our natural reaction when we are upset. But if we control ourselves and share our thoughts with someone, kind and understanding, we will soon feel relieved and emerge into a state of greater longanimity! Great thoughts, Lasaad ! Congratulations on your great win !
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Date: 3/27/2022 1:22:00 PM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Lassad. Well done my friend.
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:21:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant poem, Lasaad:-) Wondrous imagery!
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Date: 3/27/2022 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward I really appreciate your reading placing and commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me. Kindest regards
Date: 3/7/2022 4:46:00 PM
Bravo! Lasaad, excellent poem on patience. The language of your poem is so well chosen. No wasted words, each carries its own weight. I admire your gift and the way you choose to express it in your poetry. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 3/7/2022 5:51:00 AM
Much endurance you convey Lasaad--as your poem seeks to find an escape from gloom and suffering.
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