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Long Weekend In the Keys

The bleak dreary days of a cold December Were anticipated already in early September So, I talked to my boss, begged on my knees And added days to a long weekend in the Keys. Left for Miami on a snowy Thursday eve Arrived in warm sunshine, hard to believe, Rented a small compact and headed south Found lodging in a quaint little German Haus All tuckered out from the long day of travel I took to the bed and let all my cares unravel. For four solid days I behaved like a tourist Poking into whatever caught my interest I sunbathed, scorched, and aloed my burn Took in some intellectual lessons I learned At Truman’s resort and Hemingway’s home Jotted down a few notes to use in a poem. On Tuesday I experienced a rude awakening Arriving back at home late in the evening My hiatus over brought an unforgettable conclusion: A long weekend can become a refreshing intrusion. SECOND PLACE WINNER Written January 28, 2021 For Hiatus Contest

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Date: 2/24/2021 9:38:00 AM
Hiatus perfectly described L.M. Congratulations on your win.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/24/2021 11:41:00 AM
Thanks, Sam.
Date: 2/24/2021 8:09:00 AM
Milton, great write and an enjoyble read, congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/24/2021 11:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Constance. I'm glad you enjoyed by scribbling following my hiatus!
Date: 1/30/2021 2:15:00 PM
No better place to find reason to write than in Hemingway's shadow. Are there still lots of cats roaming the grounds of his house? The keys are beautiful, and I would gladly allow them to intrude on me any time! Good write, LM.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/24/2021 11:44:00 AM
Key West never seems to change very much. Everyone and everything seems so relaxed. I try to get down there at least every two years for a long weekend. But, it is getting more and more expensive!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/31/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thanks for the reply. It's been a while since I've been there, but it's an escape from everything and easy to let your stress drown in the beautiful sunsets.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/30/2021 8:47:00 PM
I love the Keys for a quick getaway during the winter months here in Kentucky. Thanks for your kind remarks. Yes, the cats are still hangin' around!

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