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Long Way To Go

Introduction: Eyes can be deceiving...So don't give up with a snap because Its only the
beginning. Fight it, ease in your future and make it glow from the gray vicinity.



We exist in an age of shadow,
Shadows that we blindly follow
The moments when we feel so cold,
That is where we need to mold

There are many roads to take,
And judgments to make
No one’s going to make our choice,
It’s something we hold within our voice

At times the path seems to be a dead-end,
That’s the part where everything really extend
We still got a long way to go,
So, don’t stroll out and believe it’s the end

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/30/2011 12:00:00 AM Aqeb, CONGRATULATIONS !! On your poem being featured this week. Stopping by to read every poem on the home page. have yourself a wonderful week,..Linda Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/29/2011 10:47:00 AM Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week aqeb. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gary Fields Date: 8/7/2011 10:14:00 PM Remember to alway's keep the flow. Keep your rhyme's tight and your subject matter interesting! And stick to what you know. Practice and confidence make's exceptional. GOOD WRITS; Keep it with-in the pen/your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS * Personal observation..... Don't do what I did for God sake, alway's use a word-check! Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 8/2/2011 1:22:00 AM Really well thought out and well expressed. Always remember to balance the wording so you don't lose the beat in a rhyme. Balance is also important in prose. You have a real aptitude for this. I believe a poem should say something and not just be a bunch of words strung well together. You do this well. This has a great message. Love it. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 9:30:00 PM Thanks a lot!!!

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 8/1/2011 9:08:00 PM nice hopeful poem is always a positive thing, Aqeb. Login to Reply Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 9:31:00 PM of course it is ;) and the best part - it always works!

Dana Smith Date: 7/31/2011 12:12:00 AM I actually see this one as more of a couplet. I really like it though. I can see why it has a really nice amount of views. Take care. Dana'lynn Login to Reply Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 9:33:00 PM your response is highly valued ;) thank you for commenting!!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 7/30/2011 11:13:00 PM Beautifully written !!!! Login to Reply Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 9:34:00 PM Thank you. I'm glad you like it!

John Loving Iii Date: 7/30/2011 9:05:00 PM i hate poetic advice Login to Reply

Richard Moriarty Date: 7/30/2011 7:58:00 PM I've read all your poems, and love them, keep on going Aqeb you have a feel for writing, best of luck, and look forward to the next ones Login to Reply Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 9:35:00 PM your compliments mean a lot!!

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/12/2011 7:12:00 AM Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Ageb. Love, Carol Login to Reply Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 7/12/2011 11:55:00 AM Thanks for the feedback Carol, it really meant a lot. I hope you among others will read my next poems in the near future.