Long Shadows

The world is tilting; 
I see it leaning into black baseness
as long shadows slink like eerie entities
lengthening out – ever lengthening,
obscuring truth and sensibility.
These shadows dim the human mind
until over time, I am left wondering:
what has become of man-kind?
Virtue’s light I recall once brighter
is being shrouded now more and more
with so much stealthiness
that few, I fear, are barely conscious
of the deep malevolence 
lurking and growing into night.
Can you see it closing in on us?
Long shadows are becoming
the umbra which will be
our pall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Richards Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Back with congratulations, Andrea.
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Yeah, this was nicely executed.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:26 PM
Well done! You’ve said this well!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Thanks!
Richards Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:42 AM
First off: Andrea, you have successfully shaken off the yoke of narrative verse (tell), and embraced free verse with a fresh new voice. (Not so long ago you said that you don't write free verse ...)The message is clear: "Can you see ...?" FAVing it. Su
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 12:08 AM
We don't play to the gallery:) At least Craig (the contest sponsor) knows what free verse is and has long been advocating "show, don't tell" (same as me). This is exactly what this poem does.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Thanks so much. Not getting many comments on this one!
Rodgers Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Dear Andrea, What gets me is the loneliness in it. You're watching something happen that others don't see yet, or won't identify. No false hope, just the honest fear that we're watching something irreversible. Heavy stuff, but it feels true to the moment. Autumn Blessings, Dear Andrea, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:35 AM
yes, and it doesn't even matter which party you are affiliated with. So much damage has already been done and there has been so much brainwashing along with outright lies given to us through past decades as violence grows and the justice system, media and governments also increase in corruption, and social media takes the place of real communication with family. It's all so sad.
George Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 2:43 AM
This slow but persistent slipping of humanity into wickedness and immorality is something like long shadows dimming light. Definitely this situation will end up in an apocalypse !
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:35 AM
you got it, Valsa.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 2:07 AM
Humanity has discard God. Now it is money and lust.
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:36 AM
I do still see people praising God. He is the only salvation from what's ahead.
Rolland Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 1:28 AM
era of darkness ? Don't know ? well written poem, enjoyed
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:17 PM
you've captured the essence of our society's slow, sometimes unacknowledged decay. I agree with the last three lines...well done for the contest
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:37 AM
thanks, Sara
Sharma Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Yes, the world is getting bitter not better day by day I guess.
Narain Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 10:41 AM
This is a thoughtful, intense poem that taps into fear of moral decline, collective forgetfulness, and the way evil is more often a slow encroachment than a sudden storm. It provokes reflection: what shadows are we letting stretch over our perceptions, ethics, and humanity?
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thanks, Jay, for the thoughtful reply
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