Long Live the Blank

You hate me, you hate me, you hate me!
Are the only words his lips will form.
But of course we all know the real translation
You's were meant to be I's and me's were meant to be you's
I hate you, I hate you, I hate you!
Is what screams beneath the surface
Heart made of stone
Eyes turned to coal
He lives but he is dead
or at least he's dead to me
I will never know the difference
Since he kicked me out from his mind
and changed the keys and locks
Long live the ___!
Although he's really dead
Or should be 
or is
or was
Whatever the case may be.
He is dead 
I am dead
Used and abused for his needs
____, the sidekick, the super spy, indeed!
____ is nothing more than a villain posed to be a hero!
I hate you, you hate me - are the only words his lips will form
Expressing himself whether in jest or graveness
Surpressing myself and my tears 
Drowning inside
What kind of fool was I, to think for once
That someone could like me for me 
and not judge me based on how I look
Long live the ____!
Although he's really dead
Or should be
or is
or was
Whatever the case may be 
He is dead
I am dead
I always have been
I always will be 
Whatever the case may be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/28/2014 2:33:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem it has style you can hear the authors voice almost :)
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Date: 5/28/2014 5:34:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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