Long Live The

“Long live the…” leaving queen’s world for a king’s - royal gestures or jesters?

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R J. Elless

Date: 5/4/2023 6:28:00 PM

Ooh, You are slick. A Lot said in a few words. Great poem. Keep rolling.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 5:50:00 AM

Thank you, R.J.!

Bill Baker

Date: 5/4/2023 4:23:00 PM

Fun Monoku with a message to boot, Kim. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 5:51:00 AM

Thank you, my friend Bill!

Ann Foster

Date: 5/4/2023 2:42:00 PM

LOL... I think both ... or maybe worse. Well done... GREAT write. Ann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 3:13:00 PM

Thanks for your fun comment!

Lin Lane

Date: 5/4/2023 6:14:00 AM

Kim... very nice play with the homophones. Monoku are finding their way into the soup lately. I'll have to give them a try.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 2:38:00 PM

You should! :)